Score: 1

"A lame attempt at a spin-off."

submission: The Goombas

date: October 29, 2008

/run.reviewmode.exe

- The voice acting, HORRENDOUS. Practice that.
- The jokes, along with the storyline, to say the least, were dumb. Think harder on your material next time.
- The animation wasn't good. But heck, you used sprites. Try using your own drawing, or better yet, follow the example of Bowser's Kingdom and The Thwomps and use custom sprites.
- Lack of action. The most action in this movie is the main character getting stomped on by Mario. So try putting more action in this.

Overall: If you're going to attempt a spin-off of the wonderful series known as The Thwomps, at least put some real work into it. With that, I'm off!

Score: 4

"It was... Okay."

submission: Madness 3D PREVIEW

date: October 29, 2008

It wasn't all that great. But it wasn't a fail, I'll put it at that.

+ The graphics were done well, but half the 3D animations I've seen here are like that.
+ Liked the song.

- The 3D graphics were nice, yes. But they were too... Round. And most madness characters (at least what I've seen) don't have eyes. Work on that on the finished product.
- I'd have liked a little more animation. I don't think a single character moved in that animation. Try fixing that.
- The clown's mask is an eyesore, compared to the rest of the animation. (if you can call it an animation) Fix that.

Overall: I didn't like it, but I don't speak for everyone. Good luck on the finished product.

Score: 3

"*sighs*"

submission: Girls just wanna have fun

date: September 26, 2008

Engaging review mode, let's get this over with...

+ Better animation than what you have been doing. That's good.
+ More fitting sprites and animations for the song.
+ Rrrrrrrandomness!

- Absolutely HATE that song.
- ... Speakonia is the tool of the devil. Do us all a favor and trash it NOW. Find actual voice actors if you're going to use voices.
- I said better animation, yes. However... Still sucked. Work more on that.
- Some of said randomness was still out of place. As I said before: Don't put randomness where it doesn't belong.
- Return of the sprite borders. This needs no explanation.

Overall: Wasn't bad, but definitely wasn't good. Practice more with LiveSwif, or something better: Actually use Flash. Seriously, most of the submissions here are done with flash, and all of the good ones are done with flash. In other words, practice making good flashes. If they turn out crap, redo it until it's good. Tweak it down to the last pixel.

Score: 9

"My favorite song on FFV!"

submission: FFV - Battle on the Big Bridge

date: January 20, 2008

Aside from FINAL FANTASY, but that's a different story.

I'm going to give this a thourogh review of the kind only hybird can bring!

Speaking of which, watch out. This is my first for music... D=

+ It sounds like a majority of Synthesizer Keyboard and drum tracks... With a touch of electric guitar...? Just somewheres at the beginning...
+ A good length. 2:26-- a good length for a song.
+ A good amount of layers on the song. If you don't know what I mean by layers, (but you should) It's the amount of things playing at the same time. The layers that aren't in the main melody sync well with the music.
+ Other than FINAL FANTASY, it's my favorite song on FFV!

- >_> Gawd, I don't know why, but... I didn't really like that electric guitar, or whatever it was in the beginning. Other than that...

Overall: A good song. What do you think of my first legit music review?

Score: 9

"kinda 8-bit"

submission: FF7-battle(random battle)

date: January 2, 2007

*points at title* Sounds like ff7 for the nes.

Score: 10

"ch-ch-ch-choco-boko!!!"

submission: FFVIII: Odeka De Chocobo

date: January 2, 2007

I looove chocobos! You bring back the ff8 glory days!!1