Score: 1

"A lame attempt at a spin-off."

submission: The Goombas

date: October 29, 2008

/run.reviewmode.exe

- The voice acting, HORRENDOUS. Practice that.
- The jokes, along with the storyline, to say the least, were dumb. Think harder on your material next time.
- The animation wasn't good. But heck, you used sprites. Try using your own drawing, or better yet, follow the example of Bowser's Kingdom and The Thwomps and use custom sprites.
- Lack of action. The most action in this movie is the main character getting stomped on by Mario. So try putting more action in this.

Overall: If you're going to attempt a spin-off of the wonderful series known as The Thwomps, at least put some real work into it. With that, I'm off!

Score: 4

"It was... Okay."

submission: Madness 3D PREVIEW

date: October 29, 2008

It wasn't all that great. But it wasn't a fail, I'll put it at that.

+ The graphics were done well, but half the 3D animations I've seen here are like that.
+ Liked the song.

- The 3D graphics were nice, yes. But they were too... Round. And most madness characters (at least what I've seen) don't have eyes. Work on that on the finished product.
- I'd have liked a little more animation. I don't think a single character moved in that animation. Try fixing that.
- The clown's mask is an eyesore, compared to the rest of the animation. (if you can call it an animation) Fix that.

Overall: I didn't like it, but I don't speak for everyone. Good luck on the finished product.

Score: 3

"*sighs*"

submission: Girls just wanna have fun

date: September 26, 2008

Engaging review mode, let's get this over with...

+ Better animation than what you have been doing. That's good.
+ More fitting sprites and animations for the song.
+ Rrrrrrrandomness!

- Absolutely HATE that song.
- ... Speakonia is the tool of the devil. Do us all a favor and trash it NOW. Find actual voice actors if you're going to use voices.
- I said better animation, yes. However... Still sucked. Work more on that.
- Some of said randomness was still out of place. As I said before: Don't put randomness where it doesn't belong.
- Return of the sprite borders. This needs no explanation.

Overall: Wasn't bad, but definitely wasn't good. Practice more with LiveSwif, or something better: Actually use Flash. Seriously, most of the submissions here are done with flash, and all of the good ones are done with flash. In other words, practice making good flashes. If they turn out crap, redo it until it's good. Tweak it down to the last pixel.

Score: 4

"A little bit of a waste of time."

submission: Don't You want me?

date: September 26, 2008

Not really good, but hell, I'll review it anyway.

+ It... Appears to have a bit of a preloader... Not sure, but it took a while for the song to start, so that must mean it was loading! FINALLY!
+ The randomness made me laugh, especially when you pointed out that you dislike George W. Bush. Also... Wait... I liked the '70s! And the '80s too! D=

- I did say that I like randomness, yes. But randomness doesn't fit in a music video. If you're going to add randomness, make it relevant to the song.
- Animation as bad as ever. Work on that, please.
- Goes with the above two points: You chose the wrong sprites at the definitely wrong time. Seriously-- Was Mona from the Mona Pizza commercial really nessecarry for THIS song!?

Overall: I point to the topic sentence. Made me laugh a bit, but it still wasn't good.

Score: 9

"Holy hell, this was great!"

submission: Mega Man & Pompous Robots

date: September 6, 2008

I loved this. Simple as that.

+ The sketchy art style, along with not using sprites! THANK YOU!
+ The voice acting was very good.
+ The humor wasn't completely random, they were well thought out jokes.
+ I found the three easter eggs very funny.

- I may have liked your sketchy art style, but I didn't like your sketchy microphone. Fix that.

Overall: Simply brilliant. That's all I have to say about that.

Score: 7

"I remember watching this when I was a kid."

submission: Wacky Pod Races

date: September 6, 2008

This brings back memories of good ol' Wacky Races. It was my favorite show in my childhood. This wasn't quite as good, but I liked it, nonetheless.

+ The jokes got a few sincere laughs out of me.
+ Wacky Racers + Star Wars = Win.
+ I loved the music you used.

- The animation wasn't all that great. But not that many people can pull off segmented animation like John and Ritchie, so I don't think that is much of a problem.
- I said that some of the jokes were funny, yes. But a majority of them were unfunny. Try to think of funnier jokes next time.
- A few characters seemed a bit out of character compared to their actual Star Wars counterparts.

Overall: Considering you were using Flash 5, this is pretty good! I liked it! Just needs a few... Tweaks.

Score: 9

"Why yes, I do have a waffle."

submission: Do you have a waffle

date: August 12, 2008

Utter brilliance. I am not worthy of these waffles. So I will leggo your Eggo, and review this movie.

+ Brilliant art.
+ Nice concept, and I do love waffles.
+ It is teh loops!
+ I LOVE the song!
+ It picks the perfect time to loop at the supposed end of the song.

- The song goes out of sync with the animation after the first run-through. Fix that lag.

Overall: Brilliance. I like waffles, and I like this flash. Pancakes are no match for the power of WAFFLES!

Score: 8

"Very challenging. Me like!"

submission: Star Lines

date: July 16, 2008

I like a game that's difficult.

+ It's difficult! I like a challenge!
+ It's very fun! Addictive, even!
+ Well designed and good concept!
+ Good sounds used!

- Lack of a replay button. I'd like to keep playing without having to exit the game and reentering.

Overall: Really good.

Score: 4

"o-o"

submission: My Sprite Flash 11

date: June 11, 2008

I'm just gonna review this and get it over with...

+ You animated it better than the last ones, I'll give you that.
+ Liked the song... Sort of.

- Lack of connectivity to the other flashes. Please connect them, at least somewhat. Or if you're not going to, at least don't put in "To be continued" at the end.
- I... FARKING... HATE... THOSE... ABYSMAL... SPEAKONIA VOICES! Seriously, if you need a voice actor, hell, I'll do it for you if you stop using Speakonia for the voice acting!
- Couldn't understand what was going on. But that's just randomness. Meh.

Overall: All I have to say is stay away from Speakonia. TYVM.

Score: 4

"Err......"

submission: My Sprite Flash 10

date: May 13, 2008

Not too great, to say the least.

+ FUTURAMA! :D One of my favorite cartoons!
+ Your own drawings were used, even if only at short intervals.

- I do believe I warned you to stay away from Speakonia, have I not?
- Revenge of the sprite borders! NOOOO!!! Fix please!
- Slow framerate! That speaks for itself.
- LIAH! You said this one would be connected to a different GWC sprite flash! Connect them better! Y'know, like the Legend of Zelda series! (Hidden reference, hopefully you'll understand it.)

Overall: You're doing good. but you need to improve! Otherwise, the GWC sprite flashes will never be famous! *shot*

The REAL Overall: You're getting a tad better. That... Is all I really have to say, actually.